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Hidden Hearts
By Aethelwyne
The silence wasnt broken
Though her eyes streamed with tears
When he held her in his arms
She tried to conquer her fears
She knows all his secrets
He's memorized her dreams
They'd rather die than hurt each other
They belong together it seems
Yet they've never breathed a word
Of how they feel inside
Scared that the other wouldnt feel the same
They let their emotions hide
Lying close together in darkness
Like so many times before
Both too terrified to say 'I love you'
Said 'Goodbye Forevermore'
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© 2006 Aethelwyne
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On Tuesday, April 20, 2010, DorothyValiga
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wrote:
All the Greek tragedies tied up neatly and briefly.
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A former member wrote:
awww, thats really sad. im liking your shit man! :)
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On Tuesday, February 21, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Wow. Beautiful. How come you're so amazing? BFF, I love you.
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
That's so beautiful... and sad. i like it. it's very touching
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On Wednesday, February 8, 2006, A Burning God
(46) wrote:
This rings true... sometimes, people do such foolish things, this is gonna be a fav for me...
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful. This was worth the long wait to read.
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A former member wrote:
Oh my...I have missed your words...and now, you've come back with a BANG and have shattered me to pieces. The rhyme scheme is beautiful, and the imagery...the message...all of it, shall surely become the mantra I wake up muttering in the night. *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
tragedy expressed in epic tone, with such tender revelation and reverberating sorrow
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
To love is good. Sublime. But to be loved, and to know beyond a shadow of a doubt that love it is. That's the clincher. that's everything. Beautifuly written, and taken to heart. Much love.
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, fenix2337
(6) wrote:
damn. if this isnt something all can relate to the i dont know what it. keep it up and if you are referring to yourself as we usually do when we write, believe me when i say "get off your ass and go after it!"
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
omg I'm crying here. This is how I feel at this very moment!!! Ty for this. Wow.... just ty! Julia~
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