Quicksand
By Aethelwyne
Patiently im waiting
Though it's killing me inside
I can hear your words and taste your kiss
Yet I still can't call you mine
Fighting the temptation
To keep these thoughts from coming alive
Trying so hard to hide from you
That I need you to survive
It doesnt matter how close I am to you
Or even that we know our love is true
Unless we are together it isn't real
It's time to show me how you truly feel
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© 2006 Aethelwyne
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On Sunday, August 4, 2019, Shaded_Iris
(86) wrote:
Love is such a quagmire. ... Truely. Much thanks for sharing and my condolences. It's a trap and the Agony ahead is the surest thing even in such an uncertain world. Desire has driven endless enamored to an earthly grave. Keep what composure you've left still, to keep hold and fill this life you live. Or else risk giving way to a cheap hand and the highest stakes
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, With love_Crow
(83) wrote:
Love is like quick sand, pulling you in before you even notice the trap. I loved the last stanza, demanding the reality and proof that the love you share is sincere. This speaks to the heart.
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
I feel you there sweetie. I love you.
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On Tuesday, September 12, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
this made me....ache.
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On Tuesday, September 12, 2006, mysterylove
(99) wrote:
its exactly what i went through, its painful, i know.
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A former member wrote:
"Unless we are together it isn't real"...*sighs* You've portrayed a feeling I've only dreamed of feeling up til now, and now that I'm feeling it, I'm not too sure I want to be. You're beautiful. ~*Beth*~