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Where'd You Go
By Aethelwyne
I tend to believe you
When you say im yours
Holding me close by your side
But it seems with each day
We fall farther away
From being together as one
Your eyes
Losing passion
Your touch
Becoming weak
Your words
Vague & incomplete
And in no part of you
Is there a trace of me
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© 2006 Aethelwyne
Published on Sunday, August 13, 2006.
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On Friday, September 1, 2017, worm
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wrote:
welcome to the reality of relationships...
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A former member wrote:
wonderful take on relationships....they all usually fail and many never end mutally
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On Thursday, May 10, 2012, ExaCute
(37) wrote:
i really like this...i know all to well just how it feels thank you for writing this well done
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On Thursday, May 10, 2012, The Black Lark
(9) wrote:
Beautifully sad. It makes me think about my last girlfriend; and I suffer. Wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
"And in no part of you/Is there a trace of me"...I know this feeling...I put up with it for almost a year before realizing that perhaps there was nothing for me to hold on to. Familiarly painful, beautifully portrayed. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, August 13, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Wow... heart hardening. Great piece! Julia~
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On Sunday, August 13, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Awwww, darling.
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