Comments by The Black Lark
- "Interesting and quite eery poem. I wish you would've elaborated more on the specific concept of the "stained-glass home" and perhaps have made it a bit more abstract. Those are just my preferences though. Nevertheless, a good write."
Posted by The Black Lark on "Stained-Glass House" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Has a very nice feel to it. Seems warm and welcoming, yet kind of sad at times. I like how it portrayed the experience of "the blues life" so to speak. It's familiar to me so I know it well. The poem in itself was also good, however I found certain parts to be a bit inconsistent. Nothing that ruined it overall though."
Posted by The Black Lark on "The Fall of the Unfiltered Camel Blues" by Doc
- "I find so many meanings and truths in this extraordinary poem, that I think that the most penetrating purpose of it is the essence of meaning and truth itself. To create something like this is a once in a lifetime achievement and it was far from squandered. Extremely well done, I can only hope to write something like this.
I still can't comprehend it... truly astonishing."
Posted by The Black Lark on "The Styx Far Shore" by redfurrydragon
- "I can see the message and what you're trying to say with this, but I don't like the poem in itself at all. It's hard to find it compelling and attractive to read; but that's just me of course."
Posted by The Black Lark on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "Beautiful. I usually have some constructive criticism for most things I read but this, to me, is damn near perfect. There's a contrast in here I can't quite put my finger on, and I like interpretive challenges.
Excellent."
Posted by The Black Lark on "Baited" by flying_fox
