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By Aethelwyne
Slit the raven's throat
It will cease in song
Cripple the wings that allow it to fly
Watch the fellow cry
Drink the wine of its broken spirit
To soar upon death and all it's promises
And follow it into darkness
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© 2005 Aethelwyne
Published on Friday, October 21, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
Love the word play "Drink the wine of it's broken spirit" A good write. I enjoyed this.
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A former member wrote:
there is a beauty in this breaking. .. well done
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On Saturday, October 22, 2005, AniDayz
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wrote:
...:...striking...:...
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, Thorn
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Indeed a truly beautiful piece. It really speaks to me somehow.
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, A Burning God
(46) wrote:
Very fitting (especially to certain situations)
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