Comments by All Members
- "yeah I personally love the lines, life playing his tune on his fife, and this life is irrelevant, my death is elegant. great lines! great poem!"
Posted by Unknown on "Long Ago Tomorrow" by SirEnders
- "Every time I read one of your works. I'm blown away. Whether it be the entire poem, a line or the phrasing. This time the last two lines amazed me. I love this. 💚"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Long Ago Tomorrow" by SirEnders
- "Always beautiful and sad. A deal with Death. How long do we have to wait for him to hold up on his end? A better question, do we wait? I hope you wait for him, for when he is ready to claim you. "
Posted by Willow Wept on "I Cannot Remember" by SirEnders
- "AMAZING! Your lack of fear and welcoming of Death seems to equal mine. You are very good. This makes me want to post my poem Deaths Words to Me. If I do I hope you read it. Never stop you have talent."
Posted by Willow Wept on "I Welcome Death" by SirEnders
- "Every person has their on meaning for what they write and why they write it. Just as every person who reads what someone has written will either draw their own conclusion or understand the writers reasoning. So that being said I really like this. I definitely feel it in my own way. "
Posted by Willow Wept on "As I Kneel To Death" by SirEnders
- "Another beautifully, dark , clever writing. I have been through quit a few deaths in my time. Most were good friends of mine. Depression has almost swallowed me several times and I wish I would have fallen asleep to not wake up. Life is to short, live it to the fullest while you still can. Great work ."
Posted by Unknown on "Deaths Colourful Sky" by SirEnders
- "I felt your sadness and pain, it made me mad for you and cry for you. very good way to express your anger , sorrow , and suffering. I will be thinking about you and reading more of your work"
Posted by Unknown on "Left In Memory" by SirEnders
- "Thank you for the comment and I do apologize for taking sooo liong to reply, didn't really look in my stats. Yet, thank you for the comment and taking the time to read sir. We have some pretty great names haha. Enjoy your day mate."
Posted by SirEnders on "Deaths Colourful Sky" by SirEnders
- "Thank you, I have been writing with this rhyme scheme ever since I was little. Thank you for your kind comment and again thank you for reading. Enjoy your day, sir."
Posted by SirEnders on "Dead Ends" by SirEnders
- "Thank you, I love Poe. He is basically what got me into writing poetry when I was very young. Hearing "The Raven" made me smile over and over."
Posted by SirEnders on "Dead Ends" by SirEnders
- "Some superb rhymed couplets SE with almost an extemporaneous feel to it as though lead by the rhymes (I do that frequently and with sometimes, very unexpected results) - cheers! - Dan
",,, and the strength of the wolf is the pack" - Kipling"
Posted by dwells on "Dead Ends" by SirEnders
- ""We lose everything and gain so little" I loved this line I think it embodied the whole piece. I also enjoyed the Poe reference at the end. Great piece!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dead Ends" by SirEnders
- "Simple yet playful rhymes, a raw dark truth and a lot of tags. I thought it would be slow to read, but it flowed well. It surprised me."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Deaths Colourful Sky" by SirEnders
- "Well, it must be said that this is really well written with tons of clever phrasing. As someone who's experienced this before, it's pretty relatable. Still, if this is what you're currently feeling, try enjoy the little things because that's all that will really get you by sometimes."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Deaths Colourful Sky" by SirEnders
- "A real downer that just keeps getting more lonely and miserable in the futility of a hopeless and joyless isolation SE. But that aside my friend, it was well-composed and starkly suggestive of what we all feel from time to time. Enjoy the gaps between catastrophes and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Deaths Colourful Sky" by SirEnders
- "Thank you, if you enjoyed this you will enjoy my others. This is very old, before I got my wider vocabulary along with my official rhyme scheme. Thank you for reading."
Posted by SirEnders on "Found My Edge" by SirEnders
- ""Get higher and higher, not wanting to come down
But I have to go down, Death has my Crown" That was a great line!
Nice solid work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Colours Seem Textile" by SirEnders
- "You must not have had good Molly :c whenever I get mine, I get so happy and I feel the need to hug everyone haha. But thank you for reading."
Posted by SirEnders on "Colours Seem Textile" by SirEnders
- "This was a very well captured and vivid trip..you portrayed here. I've only did molly once in my life and I think it was crap because I laid on the couch for a few hours and stared at the wall..back when I was experimenting with such things I preferred mushrooms and tabs..Now I do nothing and its boring but good :D You did a awesome job getting the bad trip good trip down..very much enjoyed this."
Posted by River Lily on "Colours Seem Textile" by SirEnders
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