Comments by All Members
- "I could only grasp parts of the whole meaning...word by word the work grew more full of beauty....this is one of my favorites from you."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Open asylum door" by diavolessa
- "I absolutely love the opening four lines. This is a great piece, and lots of other people have already said so, so...I'll just add my name to the roll-call too."
Posted by purr_verse on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "This felt absolutely apocalyptic. Scary in that way...sad, but remorseless like this is the way it has to be because there is no other way. I likes...~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "I don't know if I absorbed the entire meaning behind this piece, but from what I relate, you must have opened your eyes to something that you were previously blind to. "
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Open asylum door" by diavolessa
- "Hooray for renewing this piece. I wish I would have read it sooner. I drifted of into the words until they became a dream for me. Interesting write."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Sadness" by diavolessa
- "This is insanely vivid and painful. I love every line. All of them burn images and bring back memories. Great work."
Posted by Unknown on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "I feel fortunate to have found this work of yours. The words feel so heartfelt and the emotion so robust. The falling theme tends to be cliche, but this piece somehow took it into another direction. The title idea is brilliant."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "there is beauty in your despair.....the art in your words, the depth of your way; i hope no other will have the mistake of passing you by, truly you are an enlightend soul.......such beautiful words my friend...."
Posted by urbanhumility on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "Sounds like an echo for help.....I really was trapped into the whole concept of the poem....death makes us selfish and dependable at the same time..Very great read."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "for some reason when i first read this i sensed a type of metaphor " i fell over this land" love that line=)"
Posted by nell on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "WOW intense poem every single line was so painful to read. I keep reading this over and over again. "where my scream screams for help." I keep having visions of this horrifying scream. Dam. I love your poetry. Yet again another favorite. Thanks. ~P.B~."
Posted by pushblood on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "A part will try to depart, Growing to grow, When will it stop... How? The better question, To know how it goes, That this just grow and grow. Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
- "ummmm, this is the first of your works that I've read and well, uh, wow, thats about all I've got to say. I enjoyed this poem immensely. Good stuff!"
Posted by Unknown on "can you hear me?" by diavolessa
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