Comments by All Members
- "Interesting philosophical propositions and questions in this thoughtful piece. Liking the alive through memories part best, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Inside Me" by addicted_angel
- "Can a person drown from that which they are made?.. wow, what a question.. Perhaps it is I that keeps you alive inside of me, past still holding on, I can relate. This was a nice write"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Inside Me" by addicted_angel
- "Wow..this was extravagant writing..well worth the read..Kept me going in anticipations for what came next..Very good visuals you set here..oh but what a fragile topic..Shattered but repairable..the eternal soul..I felt the frantic undecided emotions evoked in this..Left or right..What do we want,what do we need..Overall really great write..Don't understand why it has not gotten much acclaim..Anyway.. you're voice is not dead here on DP..glad I stumbled on this..Thanks. .Take Care"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "The Deceit I worship in You" by addicted_angel
- "Wow I loved that. I liked how descriptive it was, and the image you get out of this is indeed very strong. Very nice writing"
Posted by Unknown on "Stalker" by addicted_angel
- "it's a good write, dear :) the last two lines is like...bam! XD though my opinion, the beginning can be a little more developed and try to illustrate more feeling? just my opinion tho :)"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "I Call Bullshit" by addicted_angel
- "Beautiful imagery you've given us to read through. Every word was just another picture imprinted on the backs of my eyelids. Gorgeous write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Long day" by addicted_angel
- "That last line.Its like Kevin Spacey in the Usual Suspects! Do you whisper it with a puff of smoke in your hand. breathless."
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "Lost" by addicted_angel
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