I Call Bullshit

By addicted_angel

You say you’re undaunted
And have no shame
But behind your eyes
Lies a different name

Perhaps you doubt me
Or fear yourself
No watching witness
No cries for help

No voices outside the bathroom
Or drunks that line the door
No one to hear your clothes tear
When I throw you to the floor

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© 2006 addicted_angel
Published on Thursday, June 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Could be a kick ass song :)

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, June 22, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    Oh yes.. nice, really nice! Flowed perfectly I think. With malice and rage. Loved it! Julia~

  • ShardsofSilence On Thursday, June 22, 2006, ShardsofSilence (222)By person wrote:

    it's a good write, dear :) the last two lines is like...bam! XD though my opinion, the beginning can be a little more developed and try to illustrate more feeling? just my opinion tho :)

  • Dei On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    Oh shit. . .

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