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I Call Bullshit
By addicted_angel
You say you’re undaunted
And have no shame
But behind your eyes
Lies a different name
Perhaps you doubt me
Or fear yourself
No watching witness
No cries for help
No voices outside the bathroom
Or drunks that line the door
No one to hear your clothes tear
When I throw you to the floor
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© 2006 addicted_angel
Published on Thursday, June 22, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I Call Bullshit"
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1228)
wrote:
Could be a kick ass song :)
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Oh yes.. nice, really nice! Flowed perfectly I think. With malice and rage. Loved it! Julia~
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
it's a good write, dear :) the last two lines is like...bam! XD though my opinion, the beginning can be a little more developed and try to illustrate more feeling? just my opinion tho :)
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
Oh shit. . .
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