Comments by All Members
- ""The cutting, the scars, all drawn by love.." This is one of the best ones yet. I am favoring this one.. the visual image of the first six lines brings a thirst that the last question leaves unsated.. Beautifully done."
Posted by DarkWolf on "The Inevitable Question..." by Deadly Embrace
- ""My blood boils only for you.." I love that line.. this is a great write.. you are amazing.. thank you for sharing all your writes.. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Within Your Eyes" by Deadly Embrace
- "So many times beauty is overlooked by hate and ignorance.. incredible way to present this image.. you paint magnificence with your words.. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Redefined Beauty" by Deadly Embrace
- "this was painful and beautiful at the same time, like watching a tear roll down a cheek...wonderful write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Redefined Beauty" by Deadly Embrace
- ""What would you say if my heart began to crumble?", weightless/dust/bleached.. random strong things that came to mind, this write is the best of yours I've read so far.. great write."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "My Confession" by Deadly Embrace
- "the second stanza.. was wonderful. the pain and still a flicker of hope absolutely crowned this write. "For I looked with the depths,
Of such hope-filled eyes,
To feed me nothing more..
Than fairytale lies"-amazing line.. "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "All That Could Have Been.." by Deadly Embrace
- "wow, this was truly beautiful."Like a withering rose,
Brushing against the wind.
And the tears that fall,
From such elegance", some amazing lines in this. I must read more of your stuff now, I'm drawn in. great work :) "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Redefined Beauty" by Deadly Embrace
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