Redefined Beauty

By Deadly Embrace

As dark as the night,
Beauty blooms..
Like a withering rose,
Brushing against the wind.
And the tears that fall,
From such elegance
Fade with time,
Yet replenish with..
L.o.n.e.l.i.n.e.s.s.

As bright as the stars,
Flickering throughout the night,
Like the characteristics of the scars
You'd rather remain hidden..
Yet, they're drawn from such beautiful art.
As a blank canvas
Painted with purity of blood.

As frail as your heart,
Broken over time..
Soaking up happiness
Only to be shattered again
By such ignorance and bitter words.
If only it were that easy
For beauty to be recognized
Instead of overlooked by judgement..

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Copyright 2004 Deadly Embrace
Published on Sunday, November 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • DarkWolf On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    So many times beauty is overlooked by hate and ignorance.. incredible way to present this image.. you paint magnificence with your words.. -Michael

  • Sin On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was painful and beautiful at the same time, like watching a tear roll down a cheek...wonderful write ~kristy

  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, November 28, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    wow, this was truly beautiful."Like a withering rose, Brushing against the wind. And the tears that fall, From such elegance", some amazing lines in this. I must read more of your stuff now, I'm drawn in. great work :)

  • A former member wrote: beautifully written very nice

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully written love this!

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