divine red

By sixsixnine

i'm feeling out of balance
circumstance has me in a trance

you know it's times like these
that we should dance & dwell in romance

take me all the way
making our short days
reasons to play

wake the dead
like my head
&
turn this water
divine red

now the adrenalin starts to spread
see the dead alive instead
& the rocks turning to sweet bread

i've only had a glance
of your inmence importance
without you i'm out of balance
my circumstance holds me in a trance
it's here we will have to fucking dance

i really know what i need
you've already begun to feed
this feeling no longer a seed
& i have no more blood to bleed

can you feel me?

***669***

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Published on Monday, August 9, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "divine red"

On Thursday, October 7, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

i love you more & you know it! *669*
On Thursday, October 7, 2004, sexually_sadistic (378) wrote:

NO WAY!!!
A former member wrote: Man does not live by bread alone. Life's hard. Love's harder. When you write, you bleed life out of you. You water the (dying) roses too. Always look up. Never give up. ~Shane~
On Monday, August 16, 2004, aXe FactoR (335) wrote:

wow, this piece is like itstitle...simply divine. i loved it. great piece, matt. :) -MeL-
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

thanx alot poets.. makes me feel good to read what you've said.. ~matt
On Friday, August 13, 2004, Deadly Embrace (41) wrote:

Definitely a favorite. The flow in this piece is wonderful. Great job 6 :) -DE
On Thursday, August 12, 2004, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

brilliant, lyrical, and felt......well done ..............urban
A former member wrote: now the adrenalin starts to spread see the dead alive instead .. Absolutely Fucking Amazing, Great use of words
On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, manywalks (750) wrote:

Yep, child, I feel ya. Good write, from the soul. ~ wen
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, mysticventures (538) wrote:

oh I can feel you alright! well said and very well thoughout - I love it !!!
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, AHHH (187) wrote:

awesome write
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, Whisper (112) wrote:

Nice write. Wish I could write like this. ~Whisper~
A former member wrote: I liked the ending. Kick ass dude.
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

Yeah, I feel you - good one, beeyoch! Ciao, T/S
On Wednesday, August 11, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

i love you tropical storm , but who you callin a bitch? >>lol!!!!!! *669*
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, elisa (1616) wrote:

you backlight the question 'can you feel me?' throughout the poem very well.great write!
On Monday, August 9, 2004, stormtalk (729) wrote:

Proofread your goddam titles, people. Spellcheck. Dictionary. Or even just learn to spell.
On Monday, August 9, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

thanx phabullshita what ever your fucking name is.. thanx ~669~

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