Only In Death...

By Deadly Embrace

Note: I haven't updated in awhile.. give me a break. :p

I try to hold back the pain,
As I choke on this reality,
Tears, like razorblades
I swallow whole,
Continuously cutting into me,
I fall to my knees in desperation,
Just wishing..
For you to be there,
To watch me profess..
My love to you,
In this deep pool of despair..
As I peel back my wounds,
To breathe these words,
That cause' my heart to ache,
You turn away..
In insincerity..
As I swallow another blade,
You fade into the darkness..
Disappearing out of sight,
I'm left lifeless and incomplete..
Only in death shall we reunite. . .

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Copyright 2005 Deadly Embrace
Published on Thursday, February 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Mahakala On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    wow i love that line, 'only in death shall we reunite', you are a great talent.

  • DarkWolf On Friday, February 11, 2005, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    "As I peel back my wounds, To breathe these words," I can relate to this in such a personal way.. outstanding write. -Michael

  • Omalleyjr On Friday, February 4, 2005, Omalleyjr (22)By person wrote:

    wow, all i can say is wow =)

  • ShardsofSilence On Friday, February 4, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    beautiful...lovely write

  • Silent Assassin On Thursday, February 3, 2005, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Very well done.

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, February 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    damn..this is beautiful...thanks for sharing it with us..~AoD

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