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No One Understands
By Deadly Embrace
No one ever understands
they just let thing's drift away
Without second thought
of what may happen
Or what might come their way
They just read the words
as if their nothing..
Nothing was ever said
No tears were ever cried.
nor blood ever shed,
Now this is all a lie
but some may think
it's true,
it doesn't matter
what is written
it doesn't concern of you
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Copyright 2004 Deadly Embrace
Comments on "No One Understands"
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A former member wrote:
I just think these kind of texst chould spread and be in larger numbers...these kind of poems are the reason why i started this.
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On Monday, July 3, 2006, sixsixnine
(477)
wrote:
fuck me! i feel this sinking deeper.
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A former member wrote:
yes... exactly right, that nothing is their problem.. i like it, and it has the "fuck you" ring to it
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
strong and deep. nice work once again :)
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A former member wrote:
I like it!! a lot!!!!
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
wow...perfectly written.
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On Friday, September 3, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
This was deep and melancholy, drifting with an air of discontent and a spiteful apathy...Wonderfully and simply rendered...Awesome work
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On Friday, September 3, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
"They read the words as if "Their" should be "they're" feel free to delete this comment after rectifying
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On Monday, August 30, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
such a lonely empty feeling with this one.. well written well said. -Michael
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
i feel this* much deeper after so much shit ~very well written *669*
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A former member wrote:
harsh
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A former member wrote:
I really like this one... it's nothing less then the truth!! Nice Work!
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
this is nice, it reminds me of a love note being given to someone a person likes and then they write some smartass comment back , or rip it up and trash it...but you make a good point with your words, -Oz-
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