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Within Your Eyes
By Deadly Embrace
I stare through the window,
Entranced by beauty,
That lights within your eyes,
I wanted to tell you..
How beautiful you are..
Like the last pedal to fall..
From a rose, drifting soundly..
Throughout the night.
But the words would not come,
As I suffocate from your prescence,
I wanted to tell you..
I'd give the world for you..
Shattered in a million pieces,
Just to hold you once more..
To feel that feeling,
Everyone adores..
My blood boils only for you..
I wanted to tell you..
That behind this smile,
Tears fall like the rain,
Forever staining my wretched heart,
Yet, you can not see them,
For you heal these scars..
I have inflicted throughout the years,
The sadness, the grief,
It all disappears,
With just one look within your eyes..
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Copyright 2004 Deadly Embrace
Comments on "Within Your Eyes"
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A former member wrote:
Great Write I loved it!!!!!
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, Delphoid-Q
(213)
wrote:
Nicely done indeed. Just by the way, line 6 => petal. Apart from that, it's quite polished.
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On Monday, December 20, 2004, Deadly Embrace
(41) wrote:
Anytime my friend :) -de
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On Monday, December 13, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
"My blood boils only for you.." I love that line.. this is a great write.. you are amazing.. thank you for sharing all your writes.. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
magical write!
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On Thursday, December 9, 2004, StAinedNblood
(27) wrote:
this is truly beautiful you made the words flow so perfectly, great job
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A former member wrote:
That was supremely beautiful. I can't think of another word to describe it.
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