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My Confession
By Deadly Embrace
What would you say,
If my heart began to crumble,
Never to be seen again,
Lifeless and broken along the ground,
Desolate..
Time standing still,
Only to capture the moment
Of my world shattering before,
My hand's that shall never touch,
What I've become to love,
Emptiness..
It could have been better,
I could have kissed the hands,
Of pure bliss..
Fallen deep within this void,
Yet, the answers are so unclear,
For the tears..
Leave only miles to walk,
Miles unto you..
I know this is a poor excuse,
Only my confessions, my pleas,
Laying empty and broken at your feet,
I shed another tear,
A tear of utter failure...
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Copyright 2004 Deadly Embrace
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428)
wrote:
"What would you say if my heart began to crumble?", weightless/dust/bleached.. random strong things that came to mind, this write is the best of yours I've read so far.. great write.
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Such pain and sorrow and hopelessness... Wonderful write. -Michael
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
very lovely
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
This is a very touching write. I love it. -Pandora-
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Deadly Embrace
(41) wrote:
Aw.. thanks *hugs six*
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
Painfully beautiful! Great write! Bethany
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
fuck this is so deep! i loved the verses & the flow very painful ~669~
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