The Inevitable Question...

By Deadly Embrace

Thorns pull,
Tearing at my skin,
The warm sensation drips. . .
From my wrist,
The lustful feeling..
I yearn for and miss..
I long for a cure,
The inevitable key,
To seal this heart,
To unlock eternity..
"When will my time come?"
As I ask from above. .
The cutting, the scars,
All drawn by love..
To paint my insecurties..
In a shade of red,
The canvas, my body..
With this blood I have shed,
A characteristic so beautiful,
Like the stars in the sky,
And the neverending question,
That shall never be answered,
Is "why"..

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Published on Monday, March 7, 2005. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

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December 15th, 2009

Comments on "The Inevitable Question..."

On Saturday, March 12, 2005, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

"The cutting, the scars, all drawn by love.." This is one of the best ones yet. I am favoring this one.. the visual image of the first six lines brings a thirst that the last question leaves unsated.. Beautifully done.
On Monday, March 7, 2005, A Broken Soul (81) wrote:

i loved this as well. very true, that it'll never be answered... tormenting! ^Autumn^
On Monday, March 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918) wrote:

"And the neverending question, That shall never be answered, Is "why".." Now thats the truth...great write, this is just awesome!
On Tuesday, December 15, 2009, Dilated View (583) wrote:

Agreed the last lines of this really wrapped it up nicely.
On Monday, March 7, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310) wrote:

'The inevitable key, To seal this heart' ..love this poem..so much goodness..so much potential..love it! -Kel