Comments by All Members
- "oh god do i love an erotic write!!! this one made my faves. good job! and make room jezz and elsie...i want a piece of this action too :p ~sex~"
Posted by sexually_sadistic on "Slave" by Lord Kalgalath
- "Yay! You should tell everyone this is about me. :P Even if it isnt. lol. I'll take credit. This is pretty damn hot, dev. Steamy in-----deed. *rapes* -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Slave" by Lord Kalgalath
- "_well...it's the word of the day...incredible sextensity.having control is fun...being controlled is rewarding as well.very cool."
Posted by suicideseason on "Slave" by Lord Kalgalath
- "_i can relate so well to your words...so much regret and sorrow...damaged goods. awesome in a being down,out, and laughed at kind of way.rock on,Devon."
Posted by suicideseason on "Flawed" by Lord Kalgalath
- "i liked it mucho....funny how this is the exact reason people go to AA lol"
Posted by nell on "AA" by Lord Kalgalath
- "Ahh . . this is so sad and filled with despair. I really like the stanza that begins with "Trust not hope" . . "
Posted by cre on "Shambles" by Lord Kalgalath
- "Mm . . I like this . . it captures a feeling that I pretend to understand . . and I especially like the use of shadows to illustrate a meaning. "
Posted by cre on "Shadows in the night" by Lord Kalgalath
- "This is one of those poems that develops in plot as you read, opening the reader to another world as they hasten to move on faster and faster..at least that's how I read it. This was somewhat unpleasant, but very well written. Exceptional."
Posted by Unknown on "Death of the Condemned" by Lord Kalgalath
- "you would think there would be peace in death but nope...makes me disgusted with the mob who prolly purchased a ticket from 'ticketmaster'. great poem! I understand the view you wrote it from:)"
Posted by elisa on "Death of the Condemned" by Lord Kalgalath
- "ahhhh tim, where would DP be without your humour. He's right though devon, incredible imagery. The stepping stones in this lead the walker through each peice of this enigmatic puzzle. Great write indeed, intruiging."
Posted by Unknown on "Death of the Condemned" by Lord Kalgalath
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