Slave

By Lord Kalgalath

whip me beat me show me pain
do it to me while im in chains

fires burn and tempests rage
mind in turmoil locked in a cage

leashes collars
beck and call
rush to obey
stumble fall

silken temple
locked in lace
on my knees
in my face

worship now
the price demanded
to heights of ecstacy
we have acended

my darling dear
my mistress dark
to your sweet-voiced commands
i ever hark

yours forever
slave, pet, lover too
forever and a day..
i worship you



-for and about Jezz-
+Cos she says so+
`with a nod to roachy`

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Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Friday, August 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Reminds me of my law school days. After classes and the books were closed. But I was often the dominatrix. Nicely done Engel. You know you and me should comepose sometimes.

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Monday, May 16, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    nicely done, this was definetely a joy to read

  • Angst Queen On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    ::laughs:: very nice very nice indeed. I need a slave ::wanders off to find one::

  • Atalanta On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, Atalanta (37)By person wrote:

    This is very good, I love it.*goes to click favorites*

  • Sin On Sunday, October 31, 2004, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    this was yummy, whips and chains and floggers ohhh my...very nice ~kristy

  • Seraphic On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    that was fun to read...and the sheer fact it's all about bondage and that good stuff makes it wonderful. good write *~seraph~*

  • A former member wrote: This definitely stemmed some thoughts and inspired bloodflow. Scrumptious write.

  • Jane On Friday, August 20, 2004, Jane (53)By person wrote:

    Yummy...

  • NikesRain On Friday, August 20, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    very sexy and intense..and the rhyme scheme makes it flow so nicely. Excellent work Dev

  • Malice In Wonderland On Friday, August 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    ok NOW I'm jealous...*runs away crying* Kya Scholar

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Friday, August 20, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    oooh, nice and sexy..its got a great flow and I love bondage!! ^_~ Awesome ~Elise

  • TheReap On Friday, August 20, 2004, TheReap (38)By person wrote:

    Bondage was the word of the morning - You rolled with it - Very good!

  • mysticventures On Friday, August 20, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    talk about submission and unconditional love!

  • glasshouse On Friday, August 20, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Yay! You should tell everyone this is about me. :P Even if it isnt. lol. I'll take credit. This is pretty damn hot, dev. Steamy in-----deed. *rapes* -Glass

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