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the end of a life
By Lord Kalgalath
So tired of this lonely life
So now I say goodbye
Last sight is of this dagger
I sheathe it in my heart
Lets its aching beat cease
Let my thoughts roam no more
Roaming always to heartache
Returning always to her
Figment of my Imagination
A Dream within a Dream
Cotton Candy Constructs
Blown away in the breeze
Blade pierces Flesh
Blood falls like Rain
Myriad drops of Nothingness
Like a Flood spill forth
My loneliness ebbs with this Life
Draining away, dripping from my Dagger
As my heart stutters and stops...
The beats again, stronger than before
I step back from the ashes,
this old life gone, Dust in the Wind
A new one stretches before me
I take my angels had and walk away,down that long bright path
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Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Thursday, July 8, 2004.
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Comments on "the end of a life"
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A former member wrote:
i loved those lines"i step back from the ashes this old life gone, dust in the wind" great poem
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370)
wrote:
dark at first but ending with light, excellant
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
The ending seems peaceful.... Good write! *JiNx*
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
i like the ending, even though it means death, there is still hope in this piece. very interesting work.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
its wonderful. with every ending there is a new begining. that means there is still hope in the world. A_C
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A former member wrote:
How do we know there's life after death? How every ending there is a bginning. I have yet to see proof yet. Fact, not just what the bible says.
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A former member wrote:
This is nothing against you, Alacer. Honestly, it was only something I think about day in and day out. If someone can prove me wrong, please do. =-MO-=
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A former member wrote:
Oh yeah, haha, great write, Engle. I see great improvement. Wondeful job. :) =-MO-=
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