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Flawed
By Lord Kalgalath
i can feel the rage,
the pain and sorrow,
the darkness within grows a little more
the light is gone
so cold out here
when youre alone
when you have noone to guide
and no one to guide you...
I stumble and fall
a deep pit of melancholy
like tar..
drawing me deeper into its blackness
every moment reminded of that betrayal
and deep the personal darkness of my soul
i know..
i am forever flawed
imperfect vessel..
i cannot be made right
Im just not good enough
and i never will be
and there isnt one damn thing i can do about it...
because i am flawed
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Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Tuesday, March 16, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
and your flaws make you the wonderfull person you are.
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
imperfection is a bitch, but at the same time it can be a good thing
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On Sunday, October 31, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
~imperfect vessel.. i cannot be made right~ so many times ive felt the same way, you expressed your pain beautifully ~kristy
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(91) wrote:
Your writing hasn't a flaw...~GoNe~
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Like tar...Your pic is brilliant too...
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
well, everyone is flawed, and there is truly nothing we may do about it except focus on our strengths and have friends that boost you up...sorry, My squirrel arms aren't quite big enough to lift you up though...lol
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
maybe you're being sarcastic, but being "flawed" in your cases makes you wiser then those bozos...they thought einstein was crazy, now look at him+fallen one+
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
lol besides einstein being dead he has made a name for himself+fallen one+
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
thank you Orchid..and you too signs..
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A former member wrote:
I must disagree. You're good enough in my eyes, more than good enough. You befriended me and since then you have done nothing but try to brighten my day. I like this poem but I hope someday you may feel differently.
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A former member wrote:
I'm here for you if you ever need me. You're so goddamn awesome... Haha, great job on the poem! *hugs* =-MO-=
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
tragic and soo in-fucking-crediblei relate in too many ways...-]darkness[-
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