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"I really like how it just keeps pulling you in deeper then "smack" the end. It's like I fell off a cliff. what a rush!"
Posted by Iwas on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium

"this is a really good write I enjoyed every line brilliant."
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"Wow this is an outstanding work of art very great write. keep up the good work. "
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium

"What an excellent job you've done here miss Caitlin! Congratulations for winning the contest, a deserving write for sure. My pulse sped up with each stanza's finish. Thrilling, chilling, and quite fulfilling! I do enjoy the thrill of each hunt you take us on, very nice indeed. You simply must post more often, your works are much enjoyed. Thanks for writing...."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium

"A very proper way to express a literal take on the feast for wolves. Id say maybe edit a few of your rhymes, like woods and wolves do not really rhyme, but few words rhyme with wolves so I understand. Maybe switching it from a pack of wolves into a lone wolf, since I think rhyming wolf properly is a little,simpler. The best thing to do though, is to test yourself in making a very rad rhyme scheme for wolves! Good stuff, just needs a little work if you ask me :) a few minutes maximum just smoothing out the wrinkles, ya know?"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium

"this flows quite well... and your up front nature in this piece is hard hitting... much enjoined. "
Posted by Unknown on "Distorted Observance" by Intoxicating Delirium

"This makes me wonder, can you go the opposite way? Like a magnet gone negative to negative? Can you instead "devour" "this irreplaceable life"? "
Posted by Unknown on "Unspeakable" by Intoxicating Delirium

"A thought provoking write... my answer would be to make the pieces fit, by smashing them together however I see fit... then paint the world I want over the mess that was..."
Posted by Unknown on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"A dark chilling tale. Great visual and write. :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium

"thoughtful and well written, i thought...a steady decline toward a dismal epoch. thanks"
Posted by mastadave2999 on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"Deep expression with an attention demanding message."
Posted by Unknown on "Unspeakable" by Intoxicating Delirium

"this is a really elegant piece. good work. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"well conveyed with a crafty metaphor... such a puzzle could be an opportunity for re-creation with all the possibilities of a blank scrabble tile ... thanks for the read "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"I see a little of myself in this, which made me laugh a bit. I enjoyed this... Cannot believe I haven't started reading you until now. This upsets me! You're a great writer and my new found favorite. .kisses. : *"
Posted by soul_versing on "Reflection" by Intoxicating Delirium

"dreams are like fire. very tricky to handle and yet so mesmorizing. I love the "The harder I push the further they drift...." stanza. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dream" by Intoxicating Delirium

"ahhhh ... ouch .. hurts so goood .. love it .. naturally .."
Posted by Scorpio999 on "Dreams" by Intoxicating Delirium

"A smack in the face... yes, that's the stark harshness of the last two lines. What a unique way to attack the thought held there, in those lines. Pieces... pieces... pieces... almost there. SMACK. Well played. Very well indeed."
Posted by Sketso on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"Bravo! i love the horror movie vibe and then how you twist it into something completely psychological "
Posted by Unknown on "Thorns On The Ground" by Intoxicating Delirium

"very beautiful write sometimes there's nothing better than getting sloshed to clear your mind haha."
Posted by Unknown on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I love the ending lines very original, I think we all feel lost like this sometimes. This was really a write worth reading."
Posted by Unknown on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"Better accept that . Reading you again i realized Why Not? Maybe it will be a good thing a good temptation!!!"
Posted by M Morgan on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Thank you everyone, for the wonderful comments :)"
Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

".. with a hearty laughter ... now then .. where is my peacock feather .."
Posted by Scorpio999 on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium

"ever deeper into human life ... now here is here .. now here .. and so it goes .."
Posted by Scorpio999 on "Unspeakable" by Intoxicating Delirium

"for some strange reason .. the dream poem keeps popping up .. damn dreams .. whats to do .. give in to the dreams i suppose .. surrender .."
Posted by Scorpio999 on "Distorted Observance" by Intoxicating Delirium

"oh my .. so much pain here .. makes for killer rhymes etc .. guys can really suck .. it is our birthright .. seemingly .. "
Posted by Scorpio999 on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium

"zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ... lmao .. but seriously .. it made me think for a second .. then i started daydreaming again .. what is WRONG with meeeeee ..."
Posted by Scorpio999 on "Dream" by Intoxicating Delirium

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