Comments by All Members
- "Simple, yet affective. I am really drawn to the physical symmetrical structure that the lines make. Very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Black" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "I feel truely sad for you to know the place you must have been in to pen that piece , Didn't notice when you wrote it , hope it's all gooderer now, "
Posted by Unknown on "Falling" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "wow, or yay! its been awhile since you posted and you did a great job with this one. I think everybody wants a piece of some part of our lives, to be in it, to confuse, to irritate, to make us unhappy and some just take whats left and spit us out. its a frustrated poem it sounds like, and I can feel that. excellent poem Caitlin and keep writing your very good at it, hope to see more of you. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Falling" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "A most cogent and forceful write, that spirals down from some past tense. A heart both forlorn and forsaken . I dare say it is beautifully received. Much like the concerto of a sad violin. "
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Falling" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "I found this here. A brief respite perhaps from the wild coyote emptying his loneliness and longing to the sky. No one comes ....nothing is changed....lonely heart sleeps as is.....I better be going."
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Unspeakable" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "I feel your pain everyone goes through a hard heart break at some point in their life some worse than others I've been there and still fighting to make the best of what i have now great poem gin sure does job with some herb..hmmm (;"
Posted by Unknown on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium
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