Black

By Intoxicating Delirium

Black...

Is all I see

You were a flash

Burning

Me up

Until there was

Nothing left

Of my soul, but

Black...

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Published on Saturday, March 28, 2015. Filed under: "Poetry"

Awards

November 8th, 2014

Comments on "Black"

On Thursday, June 13, 2019, zebra black (143) wrote:

Black becomes you That must be black light Its blinding
On Saturday, September 12, 2015, darkheartmagic (81) wrote:

The Black it comes to recreate the mind, the will we seperat
On Saturday, November 8, 2014, Pride Ed (107) wrote:

So much in so little. Lovely!
A former member wrote: Loved it, black is imagination and where we hide it's the leaves that cover a cold dead corpse or the peace where a mother sleeps. Great job
A former member wrote: Very to the point I love poems that express little but say everything we are feeling. Good job on poem. Really loved it
On Monday, March 3, 2014, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...a brief brilliant flame that burned away all the color. splendid in black...
On Saturday, March 1, 2014, haunted (837) wrote:

haha I used to hang around a person like this, constantly feeding my dark side. theres many shades of black in the dark, anywhere from depression to just down right evil, and everything in between. my favorite shade of black is the kind when people go out of there way to judge you as evil and dark and scary and creepy. I always just say, thank you! because that's the intention, that's what I feel inside and black is just the reflection I cast. and I cant be damned by being happy. excellent poem, short and sweet and very blunt and effective, a clear picture and its awesome Caitlin.
On Saturday, March 1, 2014, Strataic (99) wrote:

Black is the colour we all wear, until it's time to change. Good read, thanks.
A former member wrote: gets straight to eh point/message. to be honest how i feel sometimes.although my soul/heart is black, there always those very few people whose allowed in the open area
On Friday, February 28, 2014, BloodyMercy (64) wrote:

Very quick and exact. ..almost surgical. .. very good write.
On Friday, February 28, 2014, Syncretism (34) wrote:

You reflected the feeling perfectly. Nice. Great write!
On Friday, February 28, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (233) wrote:

I like it. ...I mean not that all you see is black, but the writing.
A former member wrote: Simple, yet affective. I am really drawn to the physical symmetrical structure that the lines make. Very well done.