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- "Well, I used to be that person from the former parts of the work. It is odd to look back on how the truth became a lie and my face became that mask. Perhaps someday another unexpected change will allow me to replace it."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Reflection" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "I wonder, if you recall, was your mental state when you wrote this somewhat disconnected from the world around you? It seems like you were exploring the inner parts you your soul and just jotting down what you felt along the path. I do love it when words come from such a deep place that they feel like an image of what is inside. I particularly like that the perspective seems to be that of an outsider looking inward. If you did that on purpose, you're a genius, and if it just happened, bravo for being so expressive. ~ By the way, I do hope you're wrong about that last line."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Unspeakable" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "You have an interesting duality here, between the darkness of the storm and the darkness of the forbidden path. I always enjoy when one set of words leaves two meanings to ponder. ~ I too love the storm. Here in Colorado we have been having heavy thunderstorms in the evenings in the evenings. Yesterday I sat on my deck, watching one such storm roll towards me, feeling its wind and hearing the thunder. Amidst this tumult is one place where I can feel a sense of wonder and peace. Perhaps it that the chaos outside then becomes a reflection of my emotions. - I look forward to experiencing your other works."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Thank you for sharing that, now I know I'm not the only one. This one hit me close to the heart, I won't lie, I started to tear up...wow! You said it perfectly."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Picture" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Marvelous piece of work! This easy flow and rhyme is why I love poetry. A short piece that tempts you to see the story that could unfold, I absolutely love this! I can't wait to read more. Might you continue this story for us at some point? It would interest me to see where you would take her. I have trouble keeping a poem short, once I start my mind just explodes and the pen struggles to keep up. Thanks for writing this enjoyable poem!"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "extremely dolorous.. enjoyed it.. the connection between dreams and reality is nicely defined..thanks for sharing.."
Posted by Unknown on "Dreams" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "love sometimes leaves back so much memories that its hard to give up..i know how it feels..this is a fine piece of poetry..loved the rhyming thing..and the flow is really good.. kudos, nice work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium
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