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  • "I sense injustice from this piece. Who or what is to judge and do we deserve to suffer for how we were created."
    Posted by Unknown on "Damned" by deathndismay
  • "An apocalyptic piece with great images the brimstone brings memories of sunday school. I like the repeated use of one word lines. A very nice effort."
    Posted by Unknown on "All That's Done" by deathndismay
  • "Great feel; reads like a sophisticated song lyric. The closing line could not punctuate the piece any better. I love a verse that smacks the reader between the eyes with its closing line; this is a perfect example of such characteristic."
    Posted by Unknown on "Fallen dreams" by deathndismay
  • "Great minds think alike and believe you might like "Recycled" that I posted at about the same time, thanks!"
    Posted by dwells on "All That's Done" by deathndismay
  • "Wondering what was the crime maybe? Such harsh metering of misplaced justice, but then the wicked do have a reputation to uphold I'd guess, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Hands of the wicked" by deathndismay
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