All That's Done
By deathndismay
Brimstone fire
Crimson shade
Haven for the masses
The
souls of all the damned
Condemned
Incinerated
Ashes
Smoke arises
Filling skies
As quickly as it kills
Hope
Diminished
Hiding eyes
Destroying all your wills
Sacrificing
No confessions
Drink the blood
Taste
transgression
Sacrilegeous
Scar the sacred
Desecrated
Tome of hatred
Scribing fate
Times to come
The prophets
fall
For all thats done
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Copyright 2013 deathndismay
Author's Note:
Hope to have front row seats some day!!!Comments on "All That's Done"
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A former member wrote:
An apocalyptic piece with great images the brimstone brings memories of sunday school. I like the repeated use of one word lines. A very nice effort.
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On Friday, January 11, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Great minds think alike and believe you might like "Recycled" that I posted at about the same time, thanks!
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
awesome pen. outstanding imagery and flow
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On Saturday, January 5, 2013, BrokenKatra
(61) wrote:
omg! can i marry this work? this is amazing.. it was..just amazing..stopped my brain from functioning..i cant think of words good enough to describe it. I LOVE THIS! :) keep writing my dear friend. ♥