Sever

By Fallenfromgrace

Tree of life, oh withered decay, by incessant
confessions of morbid dismay.
For the roots which are planted so deep in the soil
that's rich with the blood, sweat and tears of your toil.
You suffer this day for the blight of your being,
your eyes are sewn shut, recieve sight without seeing.
As I whisper this cryptic inscription that's written,
with blissful intent, that your hand should be bitten,
the sting of the serpant that's lying in wait,
for the blood of the innocent scribing your fate,
to the ledgar allegedly filled with the souls,
of the damned and forsaken, the wisest of fools.
As we tarry so carelessly, walking with death,
the lungs shall colapse, leave you gasping for breath.

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Copyright 2012 Fallenfromgrace
Published on Sunday, September 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Much enjoyed, rhymed and wafted.

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 6, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...very pleasant reading, bouncing thru the internal rhyme of the poem as it skips along to its warning...

  • Fallenfromgrace On Thursday, January 10, 2013, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much

  • bluehoney19 On Saturday, January 5, 2013, bluehoney19 (12)By person wrote:

    I absolutely love this!!

  • Fallenfromgrace On Saturday, January 5, 2013, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    Thank you!!

  • deathndismay On Friday, December 21, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    One of our former glories!!! lovin it....

  • Fallenfromgrace On Saturday, December 22, 2012, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    me too! lol

  • A former member wrote: I'm starting to really really enjoy your work

  • Fallenfromgrace On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    I'm glad you enjoy my work.. my brother is also on here... definitely see some of his work. "deathndismay"

  • A former member wrote: i really like your rhyme scheme and meter here, much talent. well writ.

  • Fallenfromgrace On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    Thank you for reading.

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