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By GraveFlower
Forcing a smile
Feeling the blues
I walk this high way of hell
In hot soul-less shoes
Damaged from miles
Weighted down
by mistakes
Karma keeps striking back
Destroying all it can
take
Caught in cobwebs searching safe spots to hide
struggling
forward though half of me died
This void of loss tore me apart
Scarred me with third degree burns on my heart
Replaying the
memories treasured in my mind
Cursing God every day since ive been
left behind
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Copyright 2011 GraveFlower
Published on Tuesday, July 5, 2011.
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A former member wrote:
this is so deep
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On Thursday, July 28, 2011, Evil Ash
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wrote:
Caught in cobwebs searching safe spots to hide struggling forward though half of me died This void of loss tore me apart Scarred me with third degree burns on my heart so beautiful this poem i read it almost everyday
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(274) wrote:
wonderful write, powerful words. great job \m/
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, pureevil8
(49) wrote:
Very nice flow and rhyme. Greatly enjoyed.
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