Damned
By deathndismay
For the one who assumes, for the judge of our plight.
For the man
or the woman whom dies on this night.
I am the reaper, I gather your
blood,
In the goblet of fire that flows like a flood
For the
water that runs through the gates of this hell,
For the souls of the
damned, for the martyrs that fell.
For the hope of the hopeless, we
spiral in flame,
As we scream for a saviour, for the one whos to blame.
We are damned by a god who enjoys our damnation,
For we are the
heirs to the pain of creation.
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Copyright 2012 deathndismay
Comments on "Damned"
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A former member wrote:
yes! awesome im going to read more of your stuff right away keep it up
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A former member wrote:
I sense injustice from this piece. Who or what is to judge and do we deserve to suffer for how we were created.
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A former member wrote:
Love this.
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A former member wrote:
I absolutely love this very powerful
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A former member wrote:
This is very powerful! "In the goblet of fire that flows like a flood" is especially moving. Thank you for the read and thank you for the comments.
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On Thursday, December 20, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
wow darlin' this is an awesome curse! My favorite forum, rhyme. I have tried to master other forms but the words just don't fit together right. they sound contrite to me anyway. many blessing and merry christmas ~PD
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On Monday, December 24, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Thank you for being a poem seeker, for noticing me...
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On Sunday, November 25, 2012, Strataic
(99) wrote:
For the fallen we rise... This is excellent, A curse bound hymn, or chant lovely.
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On Saturday, December 1, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Thank you for your words of encouragement. help me become a member to see more.
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On Saturday, November 24, 2012, xPainfulTears
(6) wrote:
Written like a curse. I love it.
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On Saturday, December 1, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Many curses are rare blessings.... check out fallen dreams....