Fallen dreams

By deathndismay

Oh reapers bliss, i twist, conform, in the ash of all thats hated
For I shall burn, my flesh is scorned, Im slowly consecrated.
Temptations kiss, so sweet as this, shall strip me of my crest.
My honor fails, the siren wails, and hails to war, no rest.
torture by the flame, the corpses lie in wait, in vain.
Yet piles of these cadavers, take from me so little pain.
I desecrate the temple, for release, for saving grace.
the cold steel bites, for inner peace, I wear scars upon my face.
This torrent of emotion, running rampid in my mind.
Shall surely be the death of all the dreams i've left behind.

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Copyright 2012 deathndismay
Published on Saturday, December 1, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Great poem. So intense and great write.

  • A former member wrote: Great feel; reads like a sophisticated song lyric. The closing line could not punctuate the piece any better. I love a verse that smacks the reader between the eyes with its closing line; this is a perfect example of such characteristic.

  • A former member wrote: Your words move me, with every poem of your i read i almost feel a connection to you, thank u

  • A former member wrote: Beauifful,and,very,good...excellent.

  • A former member wrote: Amazing. Simply amazing. The imagery was amazing. I enjoyed reading this, very much.

  • FearlessDragon On Monday, December 24, 2012, FearlessDragon (138)By person wrote:

    Damn I love this imagery, dark yet enlightening. Great write!

  • A former member wrote: You have captivated me my darling. A fan I will always be.

  • deathndismay On Sunday, December 9, 2012, deathndismay (93)By person wrote:

    Awe, thats sweet!!

  • Killerdemonchick On Monday, December 3, 2012, Killerdemonchick (54)By person wrote:

    Great imagery in this write.

  • deathndismay On Sunday, December 9, 2012, deathndismay (93)By person wrote:

    Thank you for your support...

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