Kiss of Death
By deathndismay
Breaking the silence, with violence
Awaken
The demons are
tearing the flesh
Taking the vial, by trial
Forsaken
Screaming
with my final breath
Hoping this hopelessness
Fades like a spectre
Away to the shadows of night
By the darkness enshrouding
Endlessly
clouding
What once was a glimmer of light
Radiance blistering
Listless in pain
As the flames make there march on my life
Burning
incessantly, morbid abyss
Embracing the taste of your kiss
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Copyright 2012 deathndismay
Author's Note:
Waiting for the eternal embrace of flames....Comments on "Kiss of Death"
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A former member wrote:
Very intense and deep.
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A former member wrote:
no shocker here.. cause it was effing awesome like the rest of your stuff.... ~Keep scribing~
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On Monday, December 24, 2012, FearlessDragon
(137) wrote:
I love the rhyming scheme and the deepness of it all.
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On Monday, December 17, 2012, Killerdemonchick
(53) wrote:
Great imagery. I love this. It is amazing. THANKYOU!
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Fallenfromgrace
(103) wrote:
Epic tale.
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On Monday, December 24, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Sis, Fuck you for always leavin such small comments..... Love ya.
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
awesome imagery and flow!
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, Markus Darkscribe
(60) wrote:
I have to agree with Mr haunted excellent pen
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, Star
(879) wrote:
oh wow, this is a beautiful dark, death poem you have here.. loved it 10 from me :)
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
I appreciate your views and opinions.. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
powerful wording
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Thank you..