Comments by All Members
- "this is a beautiful poem. the repetition reminds me of a nursery rhyme. and the simpleness shifts from being young and innocent in the beginning to being hopeless in the end. Very pretty. "
Posted by Unknown on "Lost Little Girl" by xX pretty vacant Xx
- "It doesn't look like you've been around for a while, and the last comment was in 2004, but this piece showed up when I picked "view a random work." I really enjoyed this poem, but I hope the real ending didn't end the same way. Hopefully you continue to fly..."
Posted by Non Serviam on "There's A Girl" by xX pretty vacant Xx
- "I can tell you, this poem brought tears to my eyes... The pain you portray is so heartfelt... This is a beautiful portray of that pain... Amazing"
Posted by Unknown on "I Still Remember" by xX pretty vacant Xx
- "This was incredible with how it expressed conceited like animosity but revealed such a fragile insecurity at the same time! For this alone, not to mention the concept, this piece was great! Amongst your best! Awesome!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "See If I..." by xX pretty vacant Xx
- "Im glad this was on someones favorites list. I hate people like this who put other people through shit they don't deserve. This was very powerful. Good to know there's still people out there who feel as I feel on this subject."
Posted by Unknown on "Tell Me You Love Yourself" by xX pretty vacant Xx
- "oh, the dependencies of addiction and the hot and cold effects we feel from the drugs...incredibly written, made me feel inside your mind."
Posted by Unknown on "Junk" by xX pretty vacant Xx
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