Just A Thought

By xX pretty vacant Xx

today
i have
no smiles
left
to give

but if you
would just
lend me
one of yours
i know
i could wear it
all day

even if only
just for you...

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Copyright 2004 xX pretty vacant Xx
Published on Tuesday, May 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, July 4, 2011, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Beautiful and clever...Perfectly written and made me smile.

  • OLd SouL On Friday, June 11, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    :) You can have the smile this piece has brought to me. :::OLd

  • Juggalotus On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Juggalotus (69)By person wrote:

    I have felt like this innumerable times, unfirtunately I never recieve that smile I need

  • Lynaes On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    This was profound and sweet, I really like this I can relate to what you're saying. Lovely work, yet so sad. -L

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