Summer 2002 [Bad Trip?]

By xX pretty vacant Xx

broken
bleeding
shaking
stealing
innocent
whore
less
or more?
pills
and screaming
only
dreaming?
only
joking
laughing
choking
breathing
crying
believing?
lying
lost?
confused
cherished?
abused
chemicals
trust
love
or lust?
tears
streaming
unknown
leading
least
i'm feeling
broken
bleeding

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Copyright 2003 Laura
Published on Tuesday, November 4, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Friday, December 1, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    Powerful words arraigned very powerfully. Great write. JD

  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i liked the flow to this, the questioning in some place, but the sureness in others. . loved the way it ended as well

  • A former member wrote: love it

  • yslehc On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    ooo lovely

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    sweet.. by the way I forgot the nexB dnce can you show me? thanks :o) monkey

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (64)By person wrote:

    yeah it kinda goes *wiggles ass and flails arms around*. but obviously it looks better when theres a group of us.

  • A former member wrote: it seems that i am not the only lost here,but i have a question, all that that happened in summer 2002 and keeps goin on? very good work!

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Thursday, November 6, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (64)By person wrote:

    umm okay i'm kinda dumb and i don't get the question... *hides*

  • Wantusi On Thursday, November 20, 2003, Wantusi (41)By person wrote:

    Don't feel dumb...because if you're dumb for not knowing what that question meant..then i must be as well.. Re-phrase that question Hate if you will?

  • Drifter On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    Damn, i like it. Franticly seeking a reason for your pain. love works like this and this ones very good.

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