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Fade
By xX pretty vacant Xx
i'm starting to forget what you look like.
your face, which was once carved into my memory
now seems as distant as the end of the rainbow.
and your smile, which used to get me through the day
is just a photograph left out in the rain.
the aching will stop soon.
and leave just a space.
not a large space,
no one will see it,
but i will always feel it there.
i'm starting to forget the look in your eyes
when you looked into mine
and said you loved me.
not quite sure whether you were ever there at all
or just a dream i made myself believe in.
i guess it doesn't matter either way.
i didn't know how much i missed you
until i realised
i'm starting to forget what you look like.
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Copyright 2004 xX pretty vacant Xx
Published on Tuesday, May 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, September 23, 2006, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328)
wrote:
bravo....touches me deeply!!!
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On Monday, October 24, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
I know this feeling, more than anyone can now. This touched a small part of my heart, thank you. ~gothic~
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On Sunday, August 28, 2005, Last1inLine
(14) wrote:
Beautiful. Almost inspired me to write my ex-girlfriends an apology letter. Almost.
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
This one really makes me feel it
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
really great write!
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Wow.. this made a big smile on my face at the end. I love how the beginning line is the same as the end that just adds something to the poem. Great write this is.. wow.. I'm just speechless! ~Kirsten~
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