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Comments by Last1inLine

"Nice piece. "I want to be anything you hate to prove I was once upon an aching time everything you saw to love" this stanza made the hair on my arms stand up. Well done."
Posted by Last1inLine on "You are now exiting Kittyworld (next trip unknown)" by Sticky Kitty

"Very raw and scattered. Torn at the seams and leaking out the bullet holes. These things make this beautiful. Good write."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Hello Confusion...You are starting to scare me" by xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx

"So well said. Christ. Nice write. The ending is just perfect, and the wal-mart bit killed me. Well done."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Why I'm moving to Canada" by Nomad

"You are the poetic one. I *really* like your stuff. You portray the cold walls around your heart very well, and describe the windows that look in even better."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Nostalgia, Anyone?" by xX pretty vacant Xx

""i want to be who i am and not live in fear of you finding out just who that is" I *love* this stanza. You have a gifted heart."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Maybe Tomorrow" by xX pretty vacant Xx

"Beautiful. Almost inspired me to write my ex-girlfriends an apology letter. Almost."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Fade" by xX pretty vacant Xx

"Really damn good. Strikes me as raw and gritty and slightly soft and emotional all at once."
Posted by Last1inLine on "the retracing of steps" by Jonas

"This is moving. It reads as if fresh from the hand of someone very angry with their own vulnerable state. "And I've taken your drug but I'm still coming down" I love it.."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Narcosis" by purr_verse

"This is really moving. The end really grabs you to the point where the words ring in your head long after walking away. Great write."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Realizations On Angel Wings" by Mindless fairy

"This is a great write. It represents the anguish that love can bring so perfectly."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Love did this to me..." by FlashDark

"Good write. I'm waiting for the entry where it all disappates and the sun pours through. I think you are too."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Search Lights" by Possesion

"This is the most powerful series of work I've come across here. Thank you."
Posted by Last1inLine on "disorderly- asylum door #13" by anathema

"Incredible write. I just stumbled upon this today and I love it. Did I mention that I am currently within the walls of an institution?"
Posted by Last1inLine on "disorderly- asylum door #1" by anathema

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