Comments by All Members
- "wonderful picture of betrayal - somehow the pieces of yourself that were shared have turned on you, parts of your journey today suddenly unsavoury and sickening, the negative associations of broken mirrors...the mystery of what this 'one word' is, so many possibilities, an anonymity which makes it relatable...thanks for writing this."
Posted by Unknown on "Glass" by FrozenButterfly
- "intense enough that i squinted the eyes of my soul in delight. i love your nonjudgmental descriptions, and honest examinations of the under-noticed. you showed me the procession of flowers as they sadly fall, which i've hardly seen included in written appreciation, but sadness must be acknowledged. thank you for this, you budge me forward in hope through strain."
Posted by Unknown on "Self Portrait of a Sad and Sorrowed Soul" by FrozenButterfly
- "Very graphic descriptions here the poem is well put together. I will however decline any dinner invitation lol."
Posted by Unknown on "Metzger" by FrozenButterfly
- "Argh! Immaculate conception and a twisted erection of a salubrious confession amongst dereliction. We are doomed!"
Posted by dwells on "Metzger" by FrozenButterfly
- "i love the symbolism throught the whole thing. we all have our doubts in our faith, you can only belive in what you see worth believing"
Posted by Unknown on "Doubt" by FrozenButterfly
- "This poem rhymes and flows very well. The subject of change is portrayed very well."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost" by FrozenButterfly
- "A very descriptive poem in such a short space. I get a sense of betrayal from this piece. I like the analogy you make with the glass pieces."
Posted by Unknown on "Glass" by FrozenButterfly
- "This is beautiful. i love the rain too. oh so softly sing to me. in soft notes . hello there you . nice to meet you . "
Posted by Devilish on "Lost" by FrozenButterfly
- "I, personally, can be very uncertain about many things until someone actually told me to make a decision~ Don't let others do it for you. Even though his words were harsh, it was the best advice I have ever been given... Like the flow of this piece, the magnificent usage of lovely words to emphasize the desperation, emotion of the situation. Then it finished brilliantly with a glimmer of hope at the end... Very nice work. ;)"
Posted by Symbol on "Sea of Uncertainty" by FrozenButterfly
- "Great write. Yea, sometimes when I write, I tend to mean the poem to be short but when you get into it- it tends to get longer. Anyhow. Thank you for the read. :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Diamonds Are Forever" by FrozenButterfly
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