Comments by All Members
- "and still, the empty, selfish feeling is worth the joy when they are there. An easy to relate to write, thank you for sharing!"
Posted by Unknown on "Homesick" by Cinn
- "as a man i find it hard sometimes to fully understand the down side of relationships from a womans point of view, this was an eye opener for me, and a great poem, loved every line."
Posted by Unknown on "The One Person" by Cinn
- "Ya know... I don't believe sex is fun unless it means something in your heart, because then it's just masturbating with a great toy, and that is still BORING. But I guess if it works for you, go for it... (I'm a guy, just so you know)"
Posted by Unknown on "A Simple Goddamn Fuck" by Cinn
- "the conception of a first party inner dialog.... followed by a second coup. but... be careful.... the third party is deadly. excellent piece."
Posted by elisa on "A Day Late and A Buck Short" by Cinn
- "answer that last question...but it's been..about 4 years since u've posted this? lol...hopefully u've figured it out :p =]"
Posted by Unknown on "You and Them" by Cinn
- "i liked this. all the questions made it a good flow. u just had minor spelling mistakes.. u put u instead of ur..but yeah, still. good. and well..i was gonna try and..."
Posted by Unknown on "You and Them" by Cinn
- "Such powerful words! Very nice write. So true, as well that you could be led in another direction then be jerked back to the truth. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "Another Crush" by Cinn
- ""The people around me seemed colorless", as if mere robots acting out the commands of their invisible masters, society's thoughts. The last line struck hard. Wonderful rhyme scheme. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Dark Days In March" by Cinn
- ""But you're the only person in the world that makes it hurt this much" because what they say is true..only the person you love whole-heartedly can break you down and tear you up so completely as this. Excellent imagery. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "The One Person" by Cinn
- "fucking up is just like building muscle... you're torn down so you can rebuild yourself again... only this time its harder to be broken down"
Posted by slightlygothic89 on "Fucked Up" by Cinn
- ""I want the anesthesia to become insignificant." God almighty, this entire piece envelopes me in a pain that no morphine could ever numb...to not hurt anymore would be a dream come true for me. Lovely...no...spectacularly lovely. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Emotional Anesthesia" by Cinn
- "Errr, I like that expression of semiresoned emotion, and not to be synical, it just doesnt fit well into a poem. But that's just me and I know little, keep writing."
Posted by Doc on "A Concern Of Happiness" by Cinn
- "I think a lot of us here at DP have felt this feeling a time or two. Thank you for expressing it because it sure is difficult to put this kind of feeling into the words that we want to put it into. Awesome Write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Homesick" by Cinn
- "Sometimes fucking up can lead to some very memorable events. "Carpe Fuckiem""
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Fucked Up" by Cinn
- "the last stanzas the best, but too much ryming, I agree, seems too forced"
Posted by Unknown on "To Cry" by Cinn
- "i definitely feel the message in this. but the rhyme is forced..and the use of short talk such as 'cuz' doesnt give the poem much effect. but in some parts your flow gets strong..."
Posted by Twilight on "To Cry" by Cinn
- "Cute, interesting and unique write. I like it, true emotions, beautifully written and well said. Great job."
Posted by K_Love on "The Wink" by Cinn
- "I am not going to say I feel the same as you, that would be wrong. But I do have feelings of deep hate for my mother as you seem to for your father. The emotion in this piece is easy to see. Love it :) --beautiful"
Posted by Unknown on "Real Hate" by Cinn
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