Real Hate
By Cinn
To think about them dying,
And not having a single care,
To think about doing the killing,
That's hard to bare;
To can't it stand it to be around them,
To wish they would just,
Leave me completely alone,
To the point that I'm going to bust;
To not care where they go,
As long as it's away from me,
To feel a prisoner around them,
To feel anything but free;
To feel a stong power,
As stong as true love,
But more different than,
The night and darkness from above;
To feel this one deep feeling,
That just can not wait,
And to feel it for your one and only father,
That is what you call real hate.
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Copyright 2003 Cinn
Published on Monday, October 20, 2003.
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Comments on "Real Hate"
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A former member wrote:
I am not going to say I feel the same as you, that would be wrong. But I do have feelings of deep hate for my mother as you seem to for your father. The emotion in this piece is easy to see. Love it :) --beautiful
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
written with emotions. very nice. i liked it. :)
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On Thursday, October 23, 2003, Audrey_Star
(26) wrote:
wow, there is passion in this piece...nicely done, very well expressed.
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A former member wrote:
excellant write, friend
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
im not the first to comment, damn it, yay for stan/gill/cinn, what ever u want to be called on here. i read the other two you sent me there really good, and i usualy dislike rhymes
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...very strong use of words...I feel the emotions rolling out of this like fire...amazing write... -Darun