The Thing About Sex
By Angelic Darkness
Fingers tracing my skin.
I really want to fight.
My attempts are failing at not giving in.
You're making me lose my might.
Seductive and it presses me harder.
Desire overwhelms my mind.
I know you're trying to break me.
You touched my hair softly.
Why can't these thoughts just leave my head.
I wanted to die right here and now.
You muttered at me, but I can't hear what you said.
Arms slide possessively around my waist.
I wish I had a gun.
Lips pressing hungrily to my neck.
I scratch your back.
You groan into my shoulder.
My teeth sink into your skin.
Can't you stop killing me?
My eyes flash dimly and I clutch my pillow to my face.
Looking around my empty room,
Your voice is ringing in my ears though your not here.
I sigh.
You see, the thing about sex is. . .
There has to be two people to have it.
Awards
Comments on "The Thing About Sex"
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On Monday, December 4, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
This was great
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A former member wrote:
Love this!!
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A former member wrote:
It appears, mentally there WAS two people there. But that's probably not good enough :-P
Nice write, if not a bit restless and with poiny things sticking out of it here and there.
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On Monday, March 8, 2010, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
Hahaha...Nice ending
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On Thursday, October 15, 2009, jajang829
(23) wrote:
Fantastic Write... I actually had multiple memories and thoughts pop into my head with each line... very well done....
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On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
great twist... i love it ~*~TART~*~
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful write, ver original and well i liek the twist at the end. I didn't see it coming.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Green-eyed Raven
(54) wrote:
*sigh* I loved it, thats all I can say in this comment... *wink*.
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A former member wrote:
haha! i really like that. especially the last two lines!
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On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
sex....doesn't need two people. sometimes just one. ;) A_C
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On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Angelic Darkness
(27) wrote:
Dearies, Dearies, that's not sex, that's masturbation. *Winks.* ~*~Angie~*~
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A former member wrote:
Not necessarily, try making love to yourself every once in a while.
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
*laughing* very good, very funny write. Thank you for this one. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
right the hell on!!
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A former member wrote:
i really loved this good emotion thank you
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A former member wrote:
i LOVED this... it was amazing. great write, and very original ending. -sorrow
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On Friday, January 14, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
magnificently beautiful...
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
Oh I loved this. Didn't see the ending coming at all. Awesome awesome awesome. -Cinn
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Dei
(663) wrote:
omg... yeah.. i majorly felt this one. incredible write. im very impressed. thank you for writing this
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Angelic Darkness
(27) wrote:
*Blushing profusely.* Thank you, I don't think I've ever had so many comments come in on one of my works in just a day like this. ~*~Angie~*~
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
Wow this is exceptionally incredible!!! This is an awesome poem! -JiNx(ie)
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
oh holy shit...this is WONDERFUL*EXCEPTIONAL* i love it...i definetly relate,more than i can say. this is going on my favs**GREAT JOB
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
ohhhh damn I know exactly what you mean--very nice work here--the ending is like a left hook
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
damn those technicalities...but some of the most beautiful moments are the ones we keep to ourselves, wonderful write ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
great write