the watching waiter

By Darkest_Addiction

you wrap your arms around my waist
as I sit down on your lap
your chin is on my shoulder
you whisper softly in my ear
i love you my little whore
i smile a little smile
that no one else can see
as your hand slides up my leg
i can see the waiter watching me
so i whisper that he's watching
so you say lets give him a show worth watching

you slip a napkin over your lap
I understand completely
undo your buckled belt
slide my hand down your pants
and massage you for a while
the restaurant is empty now
the waiters eyes are on us
and I cant but ask if he can come and play
you say that you don’t mind
so I stand pulling down my little black dress
and I walk to the watching waiter and ask if he would like to play

all 3 of us leave we take the watching waiters truck
we end us in an abandon field
you tell him he cant have sex with me but do anything else he wants
I tell you both to unbuckle your pants
and I grab on taking turns with my mouth and hands
i grab on to the watching waiters rod
i stroke it up and down
hard as steel it turns me on
i ask if just this once i could
you say if you could watch
so i climb up on the waiters lap
i strattle him with my legs his cock against my panties
as i rock back and forth he slides his hand over my breasts
i push against him hard, moaning with pleasure
he slides his hands to my hips and kisses me with force
he lies me on the truck bed
he pulls the dress from my body
the truck is cold against me

i see you watching me and the waiter
as your hand moves up and down your organ
as i turn my attention back
he leans down and uses his tongue to please me
my legs become restless
he kisses a trail down to my panties
and slides his hand inside and presses against me
i let out a moan and he slid my panties off
he slid his hand behind me hugging me to him
not quite entering
he brushes my neck with a kiss
as he slides inside me
i let out a cry of pleasure
he slowly pick up speed
i push my hips into him
making him go deeper
i start to tremble i start to shake
im almost ready to climax
i know that its coming as i push my hips hard
making him go as deep as he can
i finally reach my climax as i bite down on his shoulder
i can taste his blood
as i bite his shoulder he reach his climax
i feel his semen exploding in side me
he lies in me for a moment

then we gather our clothe and leave
he drop us off and i think i want to do this again
but he was already gone
so we go back to the diner to find him
but all that on the land is a cemetery
we start to look around but we didn’t know his name
as we stumble over a tomb stone
all that was written was......
the watching waiter 1920-1941

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© 2005 Erin mae mcavoy
Published on Friday, November 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Short Story"
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  • A former member wrote: Holy shit that was hot as hell with a spooky twist. I liked it alot.

  • JiNx On Friday, December 30, 2005, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    Damn.. Nicely done hun.. I liked it quite a bit.. and you left an awesome catch at the ending..

  • Rone4611 On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, Rone4611 (123)By person wrote:

    haha wow. I need a cigarette after that one man. The end has quite a twist. Well done.

  • Darkest_Addiction On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, Darkest_Addiction (44)By person wrote:

    i needed cigarette after writing it ;)

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