Homesick

By Cinn

I think I'm a bad person,
So incredibly selfish,
I feel sick and lonely and out of place,
But only when you leave;

I admit it,
I want to be your world your life your everything,
But when you go do something fun,
After being with me almost everyday,
I feel so rejected and lonely;

That can't be a good thing,
I'm just think me me me my my my now now now;

I know I mean something to you,
And when you get goin',
I know I've never been loved like this before;

But they you're not here,
And I'm so alone,
I know you'll love me just the same,
But when you aren't with me I feel so....
Homesick.

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Copyright 2004 Cinn
Published on Saturday, February 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: and still, the empty, selfish feeling is worth the joy when they are there. An easy to relate to write, thank you for sharing!

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 14, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I think a lot of us here at DP have felt this feeling a time or two. Thank you for expressing it because it sure is difficult to put this kind of feeling into the words that we want to put it into. Awesome Write ~*~Tart~*~

  • LoneWolf On Saturday, February 14, 2004, LoneWolf (34)By person wrote:

    This is so reminiscient of how I feel all the time, thank you for so completely capturing my feelings in this great poem. ~*~Lone Wolf~*~

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