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  • "this comes from the fact that someone i cared about very deeply was more intriguing to me before I fully knew him. now i see him differently, less appealing, but still someone copletely insane and oddly enough, something i desire *but cannot have*"
    Posted by XCryingMinotaurX on ".Insides . Like . Glass." by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "another line that i felt pretty thoroughly was "someone that takes ur words and makes them into daydreams and smiles" analysis...pondering...burning. a horribly beautiful and torturous thing to do to yourself. yet we are all guilty. wonderful write.."
    Posted by Twilight on "A Letter to JR" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "ok it took me a while to take thi sone in. this is powerful. truly honest..and brutal. th e line that touched me was "and for fear of losing, dont let go. " what an amazing thought. no doubt in my mind why you intrigue me..."
    Posted by Twilight on "A Letter to JR" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "Fanfuckingtastic. This is unbelievable... phrasing is excellent, powerful... a journey with one hell of a destination. A favourite for sure. Well done. FF"
    Posted by flying_fox on "Denial Suits Best" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "hmm i read this one again...reliving a moment..when you see them, knwoing how you felt in that moment when you first saw them..looke into their eyes...its like falling all over again. iknow the feeling and you express it well. nice."
    Posted by Twilight on "My Waking Nightmare" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • ""he never meant to dance in my blood but he never intended id follow his bloody footprints home" those two lines were brilliant..but also believe these lines to hold a sense of blame to yourself. "
    Posted by Twilight on "Love, But Love Me Not" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "wow...i see some hope in this one. which brings a smile to my face because usually you rpieces are sad. brilliant write."
    Posted by Twilight on "Numb" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "the list of regrets double in length day by day. sometimes intentionally doing things we know we will regret just because of how they feel at the moment. i can totally feel every word."
    Posted by Twilight on "The List" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "stepping repetitively back int oa trap because the pain feels so good...to be capture, to fall in love. then to falter at the smallest sight of malice in their eyes. but run back for more everytime. incredible write."
    Posted by Twilight on "Virgo's Spica" by XCryingMinotaurX
  • "ah..to feel trapped within feelings you feel shall never fall away from your grasp. i have been there and can relate.a truly torturous process it is to love and feel unloved in return. "
    Posted by Twilight on "And In These Walls" by XCryingMinotaurX
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