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.Insides . Like . Glass.
By XCryingMinotaurX
Your pristine mystery was far more intriguing than your late night realities,
and your instrumental hand movements were far more beautiful than your
tongue spun tales.
Your ageless youth far out weighed your dying glow,
and your fancy fetishes far out numbered your necessary normality.
Your inner civil war far over shadowed your personality's genocide,
and your will to give in is far more stubborn than your sex drive.
Break me again
for my heart is as hollow as your words
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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Tuesday, February 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on ".Insides . Like . Glass."
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On Friday, March 24, 2006, monalisamarie
(113)
wrote:
I really like this! Great write! ^_^
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
DAMN.can i fix you and refill your heart.you are beautiful to me in everyway.**** my beautiful minotaur.by the way i think you're hot.knight
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
wonderful piece! i especially love the fourth line, but the whole thing is so powerful. great work. purr
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
I have to smile at this. You described a moment I can relate to flawlessly. The shards do cut.. deep. But now I laugh at the past and see the truth. Well done. :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
and when i think i have written something good, i read something Much Much better and have the bar raised. =] Good work!
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
hm...it was beautiful, but I'm not quite sure I understand fully what you're saying...what I got out of this...it's not good but it's not bad. great write *~seraph~*
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX
(20) wrote:
this comes from the fact that someone i cared about very deeply was more intriguing to me before I fully knew him. now i see him differently, less appealing, but still someone copletely insane and oddly enough, something i desire *but cannot have*
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX
(20) wrote:
...so once again he breaks me with his hollow words and i still flock to him cause im stupid like that. yeah...yeah.
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
This shines...absolutely exquisite writing. I am in awe of your talent. FF
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, nightshade
(120) wrote:
oh man i would hate to be whoever your talking about sounds like they sucked all around but i really love this write outstanding
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