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A Scar for a Kiss
By XCryingMinotaurX
I rushed to him and fell
down
hard
bleeding
I rushed to him and showed him the wound
red
pain
blood
And with those lovely brown eyes upon me, he took my arm and kissed my
wound
faint
heartbeat
love
Time passes, and after his kiss, my wound is nothing more than a mark,
a memory, a scar...
I rush to him yet again
fast
needy
blind
And with those lovely brown eyes upon me, he kissed my body and kissed
my lips
want
need
desire
Time passes, and after his kiss, all I have left of him is a mark, a memory,
a scar...
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Copyright 2003 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Thursday, November 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Scar for a Kiss"
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On Monday, September 24, 2007, Bluegirl
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wrote:
Enchantingly done. The words are chosen perfectly, I am in love from the first verse.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, pushblood
(27) wrote:
My god this is beautiful. The format the words spoken everything about this piece. But the last line left me shaking..Thank You ~P.B~
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On Saturday, November 15, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
brilliant and beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
You amaze me every time minotaur, keep it up... share your "sickness"
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
superbly written. what else is there to say?
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
This is excellent. Form and emotion both extremely well realised. Nice work!
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