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- "Makes us who we are; whether we want it or not, and gives us the power (and the strength) to see what others cannot - a wisdom that many will never know. Cheers sadly my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Flashbacks and memories" by Deviated09
- "I'll frequently start with a vague idea and then wind up someplace else. Rhyming poetry can do that frequently, but in this piece of prose perhaps another muse took over at the end, cheers D9!"
Posted by dwells on "Ghosts of my past" by Deviated09
- "I won't even try to guess at the esoteric side of this, but I'm in love with the imagery, I think of a council of blackened gods summoning up flames and ice to smite a world of insanity; the lines seemed to creep, rising with each stanza before culminating with the final. Thanks for posting, Deviated."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "The Spirits Inside" by Deviated09
- "Thanks! This is probably my favourite piece that I have on here. It's one of my all time best, in my opinion. Check out my other stuff sometime =) and thanks for the kind words!"
Posted by Deviated09 on "The Spirits Inside" by Deviated09
- "I can tell you are a very caring father just by reading this. It makes my heart melt and wish that all fathers felt this way."
Posted by Unknown on "The Father's Lullaby" by Deviated09
- "I've been around in my time, experienced a lot of things beyond the scope of my young age, been shot, stabbed, branded, beaten, I've witnessed murder, been homeless, saved a life, been responsible for a death, the list goes on and on. It's hard to accept the knowledge that there is always someone out there who has it far worse than yourself, but it is something that helps you remain stoic in the face of all the challenges that come your way. There is something about being at the lowest low that allows the people who have been there to wake the fuck up and realize that life is more than just existing, but something to be experienced at its fullest with no reserves or fear of danger or pain. It helps you keep a smile on your face even if and when you feel like breaking down and giving up. I think you express some very keen and important life lessons in your recollection, ones that I think an unfortunately small number of people will come to live by."
Posted by Unknown on "My admission. My soul." by Deviated09
- "If only it was just a story. This was my version of a good friend's experiences in the sandbox. may god bless our soldiers with every fiber of their being for what they give us. HOOAH!"
Posted by Deviated09 on "A memory of a hero." by Deviated09
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