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- "Maybe one day I can have someone like that in my life, it must make you feel really great to have the support and love of someone. Nice poem, not at all cheesy."
Posted by Unknown on "Thank you ...." by Anoblechicken
- "I think everyone has come across the thought expressed in the last line. I have struggled with it pretty desperately in my past so this poem really strikes a chord in me."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Freedom" by Anoblechicken
- "Hahaha I love the ending- good luck sis with cleaning it cuz I already vacuumed- I used to always take the easy chores and stick my sister with the bathroom. this is an excellent write, very...descriptive lol"
Posted by BrideToAgony on "The Bathroom" by Anoblechicken
- "this was so motherfucking amazing and hilarious..ending slipped off my tongue wanting for more..~to explore~ bathroom like you..flowed so well..in the well almost fell..well..good bye..be well"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "The Bathroom" by Anoblechicken
- " I wont offer the rah rah comfort of a sideline cheerleader. As good as the intention can be the results are often less than none. As beautiful and powerful as I believe words can be, sometimes they have less worth than burnt ashes. I've walked the road of fragile glass and I sincerely hope yours does not fracture more than it already has."
Posted by Unknown on "Tired of being tired" by Anoblechicken
- "i just had my best friend of 3 years fuck me over wake me up out of my bed with my kid in the room and spit in my face, she's suppose to be the god mother of my child and told me that she hates my baby... while my boyfriend stood there and did nothing. maybe you should open your eyes and see what is around you because i didn't and i got really hurt, i am sure people do care, because i am one of those people that cared morefor others then myself, but when you are faced with such dark realities you realize how trully fucked up human beings can be no matter when words or promises or bonds you made with them..."
Posted by Anoblechicken on "Tired of being tired" by Anoblechicken
- ""were all too fucked up to realize that someone else might care,"
so it's not just us...it's you too...maybe you need to change your attitude a little...
because people do care..."
Posted by heroineyes on "Tired of being tired" by Anoblechicken
- "may look around your house and think that there's a million things you need to do, but DONT. Just sleep. Gas drops are your best friend. You get them at the store in a little bottle. I cannot tell you how important that is...no joke :O). Also, get one of those chairs that vibrate and put it in front of a running dishwasher if you can't get the baby to sleep. Also, driving around in the car will put a baby to sleep fast too. Anyways, there are so many things I want to say, but I promise it will really just fall into place. You will be a great mother. Keep your head up, and if you need anything or just want to talk, let me or anyone else know. Dont be afraid to call someone to vent. Its pretty important for your sanity."
Posted by lord_beanus_christ on "My 1st child" by Anoblechicken
- "I know how you feel, and Im so sorry that you are scared. I got pregnant when I was 17, and it was the scariest thing I've ever gone through. I was so immature, and wasn't the least bit ready for that kind of adventure. Everything was okay, though. It was really really hard for the first few months, but then gradually it got easier and easier. Having a baby really forces you to grow up. I can honestly say that it was the best thing that ever happened to me, because I don't know what kind of person I would be today if I hadn't of had Riley. He is almost 4 years old now, and he is just so awesome. I really feel proud of myself because, although it's been really hard, I made it. I got through it, and my son is wonderful, and he is so smart and cute and everyone loves him. I can't tell you how awesome it is to be able to look at this little baby in front of you, and know that YOU made him. That he/she will have YOUR features. It's so amazing. I wish I could tell you that times ahead won't be difficult because unfortunately they will. Sometimes, you will get so scared and think that there's no way that you can go on. But, everything will be just fine. You just have to hang on. Some advice: Sleep whenever the baby sleeps during the day. You "
Posted by lord_beanus_christ on "My 1st child" by Anoblechicken
- "well i understand how you feel. i have 4 months...no husband, no boyfriend, no support really. i work and buy as much as i can to prepare. read books to educate myself. but i'm scared too... i didn't even know if i even wanted to have kids. all i can advise is prepare as best you can. cuz a child does need more then just love, or it'll die. talk to anyone you know with children...ask for advice. you'll figure it...best of luck to you. 1 month...wow. that is soon. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "My 1st child" by Anoblechicken
- "well first off, congrats on the pregnancy, a child is a miracle. and whether you are mature or not, she began to mature you her own way those first few days of her life. i don't know how young you are but really, everyone is probably telling you to do one thing or another and you're getting confused. they say that being a mother comes naturally to a woman but just some women can't do it. so i suggest you listen to your heart (thats a real corny thing for me to say) and do what you think is good for your baby. congrats on the baby once again. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "My 1st child" by Anoblechicken
- "you have incredible insight, have more faith. All that baby deserves is your love (which she already has), and for you to have faith in yourself. Easier said than done, I know in so many ways. The transition isn't overnight and it's over time. A lifetime. and by no means are you alone.
g"
Posted by freudian-slip on "My 1st child" by Anoblechicken
- ""Manic qualities are the least of my worries." I feel like with my last poem I just stole this from you without having read it ever before. You're on my wave, or im on yours, or maybe its just shallow water. I don't know, either, but I know exactly how it feels."
Posted by Aleas on "Intimacy Like this" by Anoblechicken
- "I thought I was pregnant recently, and it scared me shitless, mostly because I couldn't take care of myself, much less a tiny child, and also because I was afraid I would turn out like mother. My doctor thinks I had a miscarriage, and that hurts even worse. Babies are a blessing. Think of yourself as blessed because you're pregnant. I'm here to help as much as I can, because I understand that fear. I'm sure your little girl will be gorgeous, and that you will love her unconditionally like any mother should. Your bringing love into this world, and a mother's love is like no other. Please remember that, and know that there are people here to support you. Not only me."
Posted by Unknown on "My 1st child" by Anoblechicken
- "The hardest times to leave comments are the times that I feel it is needed the most. Works like this is a shining example. One can never say anything to bring them back, to save their pain, or to truly comfort you. All we can do is tell you this is a beautifully written tribute and hope time eases your pain but never chips away from your fond memories of those we have loved and lost."
Posted by Adam on "Memory of a girl in a alcohol related car accident" by Anoblechicken
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