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My own disaster
By Anoblechicken
He loves me true,
He was the one.
I could say die,
He would say,"done."
His touch, his voice,
was intoxicating
Always leaving me
Wondering
I loved this man,
And still i do.
But gave him up because of you
All you did was use my up.
Putting my heart in a Dixie cup.
I broke his heart
And broke mine by mistake
I really was my own disaster
the cause of my own heart break
You used my up
And spit me in
I'll never be the same again
But then how are you to blame?
When i was the one lost in my own mind game?
And now the love of my life has gone away
Already looking to better days
Meanwhile, I'm left alone
Listening to a mocking drone...
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Copyright 2003 Anoblechicken
Published on Wednesday, October 15, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "My own disaster"
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A former member wrote:
Powerful, to give up someone you love for another... heartbreaking...
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, stormtalk
(729)
wrote:
It's almost impossible to write ABAB without some of them sounding forced... in the future, try free verse a little, it tends to have fun results. This poem is good stuff, though. The first stanza is particularly well-written... and too familiar.
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On Wednesday, December 31, 2003, Anybody_Killette
(47) wrote:
hmmm.. i like it..
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, Liz
(267) wrote:
Really, I think this is one of your best.
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A former member wrote:
hhmm, sad topic. Kool work!
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