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10 single edged razor blades
By Anoblechicken
One to start mending me
9 more everyone will comprehend me
Two to start to numb the pain inside
8 more maybe it will subside
Three to stop my burning eyes
7 more I'll realize
Four to feel a little bit of release
6 more maybe I'll have peace
Five to subdue the hate
5 more I might begin to really appreciate
Six to really understnad and know
4 more and my true self will show
Seven to leave an unbridled scar
3 more i can't give up I've gone this far
Eight to keep my mind at rest
2 more blades i must molest
Nine to really inflict death
1 more for a final breath
Ten to say my last goodbye
carved in blood, no more light
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Copyright 2003 Anoblechicken
Published on Wednesday, December 31, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "10 single edged razor blades"
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A former member wrote:
I love how you wrote this. I've never read anything like it. This really hit home for me.
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On Thursday, October 7, 2004, Butterfly
(99)
wrote:
Wow this is so unique. Very well written.
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On Thursday, July 15, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
this piece is very original, i enjoyed reading this. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
Wow...this is different. i havent seen a poem like this. After reading a lot of yor poems i thinnk youare a veryunique writer with a different style ~Ameythyst ~
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Cleverly done... good cutting poems are rare, and I can't say I like the idea of cutting, but this is definitely a good poem. Reminds me of a version of that Christmassy song with the doves... but more from a Nighmare Before Christmas perspective.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, DeathSentance
(17) wrote:
very original...very true...very sad
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A former member wrote:
interesting........
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A former member wrote:
i love razor blades
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A former member wrote:
I like this, it is twisted, demented, and unique. Great poem, may you write many more.
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